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21.3、提高城市核心竞争力的需要
进行城市创新试点,建设合肥科学城是安徽发展的一个重要机遇,也是合肥加快现代化大城市发展的重要机遇。通过将合肥科学城建设成为实践科学发展观和探索“中部崛起”的示范区,有利于合肥成为具有国际竞争力的区域创新创业中心,加快实现全市科技、经济、社会跨越式发展;有利于提升合肥城市形象,强化城市综合竞争力,形成人才、技术、成果集聚的“磁场”,为合肥市经济社会发展积聚人才;有利于强化合肥市产业支撑力和城市承载力,强力推动现代化大城市建设,全面提升合肥全省经济中心地位.


译文:
21.3,The necessity of improving the core competitiveness of Hefei

Carrying on innovative pilot project in Hefei and building Hefei Science Town is an important opportunity in the development of Anhui, at the same time, is an important opportunity to quicken the development of Hefei as a modernized metropolis. Hefei Science Town can be turned into an demonstration area to practise scientific development view and to explore the mode for the rise of Middle China. By doing this, it can help Hefei in becoming the center area of regional Innovation and Entrepreneurship with international competitiveness,accelerate great-leap-forward development of Hefei’s science and technology , economy and society. It can help promote the image of Hefei, strengthen Hefei’s synthesized competitiveness and form a  " magnetic field " attracting  talents , technology , achievements for the socio-economic development of Hefei.It can help strengthen the  industry's bracing ability and bearing capacity of Hefei as a city.It can push forward the construction of Hefei as a modern metropolis greatly and promote the center status of Hefei in Anhui province.

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提高城市核心竞争力的需要
the need to improve the city's competitive edge in key areas

进行城市创新试点,建设合肥科学城是安徽发展的一个重要机遇,
it is an important opportunity for the Anhui province to develop the city of Hefei into a science and techonology center as designated by a state pilot program

也是合肥加快现代化大城市发展的重要机遇。
it is also an opportunity for the city of Hefei to speed up its urban  modernization development.

将合肥科学城建设成为实践科学发展观和探索“中部崛起”的示范区
Heifei, as a science city, will be further developed into a model district to practice developing science through practice and to explore the possibility of "rising from Central China."

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3ks,nyleda,butl对方提供了key words

核心竞争力the core competitiveness

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we can discuss the two versions

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21.3、提高城市核心竞争力的需要
进行城市创新试点,建设合肥科学城是安徽发展的一个重要机遇,也是合肥加快现代化大城市发展的重要机遇。通过将合肥科学城建设成为实践科学发展观和探索“中部崛起”的示范区,有利于合肥成为具有国际竞争力的区域创新创业中心,加快实现全市科技、经济、社会跨越式发展;有利于提升合肥城市形象,强化城市综合竞争力,形成人才、技术、成果集聚的“磁场”,为合肥市经济社会发展积聚人才;有利于强化合肥市产业支撑力和城市承载力,强力推动现代化大城市建设,全面提升合肥全省经济中心地位.


译文:
21.3,The needs for improving the core competitiveness of Hefei

Carrying on innovative pilot project in Hefei and building Hefei Science Town is an important opportunity for the development of Anhui as well as to quicken the development of Hefei as a modernized metropolis. Hefei Science Town can be turned into an demonstration area to practise scientific development view and to explore the mode for the rise of Middle China. By doing this, it can help Hefei become the center area of regional Innovation and Entrepreneurship with international competitiveness;accelerate the rocketing development of Hefei’s science, technology , economy and society; promote the image of Hefei; strengthen Hefei’s synthetical competitiveness and form a " magnetic field " which shall attract talents , technology , achievements for the socioeconomic development of Hefei.It can also help to strengthen the industry's bracing ability and bearing capacity of Hefei, push forward the construction of Hefei as a modern metropolis greatly and promote the center status of Hefei in Anhui province.

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具有国际竞争力的区域创新创业中心
an internationally competitive local center for technology innovation and business establishment

加快实现全市科技、经济、社会跨越式发展
accelerate the realization of a leap-forward advancement of the city in science and technology, economy, and society

有利于提升合肥城市形象,强化城市综合竞争力,形成人才、技术、成果集聚的“磁场”
(it is) advantageous to promote the image of the city of Hefei, to strengthen the overall competitive ability of the city, and to form a "magetic field" center attracting talented people, promising technologies, and research achievements

为合肥市经济社会发展积聚人才
build up a talent pool for the development of Hefei's economy and society

有利于强化合肥市产业支撑力和城市承载力
(it is) advantageous to enhance the potential industrial strength and logistic capacity of the city of Hefei

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中部崛起=rise of middle china

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