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our youth(serial 11)

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The harvest in summer will be end. All the classmates will write the summarize and read in front of class.

Liu Tao might write it ,but how to write it which let him to though for long time. He might write better than others.so he wrote ’through harvest in summer, I had learned from the peasants how to plant the rice and how to cut the wheat which is ripe I had know that we must study hard ,so we could devote our force for changing the different between city and ,of course, I had harvest another felling that is to walk around the reservoir in the night.

After it all the classmates was watched Qing Zheng.

The teacher was angry but he might say to all classmates:” I agree Qing Zheng do as it!”

Liu Tao smiled and said to teacher:” thank you very mush!”

All classmates was laughing loudly.

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  • our youth (serial 42) 2020-5-9 18:53

    I suggest that you read the New Yorker, the Paris Review, and Harper's if you strive to learn how to write like a literary type;  such A-list publications publish several gripping stories every week or month.  At the very least, you could learn how to flesh out this story with more detail. Good luck to you.

  • our youth (serial 35) 2020-5-3 19:31

    Sorry for being plain-spoken, and I don't mean to discourage you from writing creatively, just one suggestion: in addition to spending time developing the plot of your story, please also put in the hours to work on grammar and other basics of English.

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