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our youth (serial 10 )

Viewed 205 times 2020-3-27 10:57 |System category:News

All classmates laughed as passing festival. They cried to Liu Tao:”smelly fertilizer.” They let the meeting to stop although the teacher cried to them :”be quiet.”

Liu Tao stood in the front and waved his hand to them, he smiled to them as he was hero.

The teacher was angry and cried to Liu Tao: ”get out!” his voice was so loudly and terribly

The teacher called Qing Zheng to front  and told her:”you are monitor, you must do his thought work.,must let him to  observe our discipline.”

Qing Zheng nodded and answered:”ok, I will do it!”


After meeting ,Qing Zheng called Liu Tao and said to him:”I want to walk with you around the village!”

Liu Tao answered to her :”there is a reservoir near the village, we walk to here where the air is very moist, we could talk about our future.”

Qing Zheng shamed ,but she was happy in her heart. their future that they had talked for many times. He had told her that he want to become the doctor, he want to save the life when the person is reluctant to leave the world.

Qing Zheng was so excite . She believed that he might achieve his ideal. But she said another words :”I found that your literature level high, you could become the writer.”

Liu Tao surprised and cried:” I’m thinking as you, so I must learn from the great famous writer,’ the doctor only treat the crops , but the writer treat soul’.

They walked around the reservoir long time, they talked ther futer and ideal although they forgot time, it was so late.


Next day morning,Qing zheng got up so early ,she wanted to tell her classmates that she didn’t delay the works, she might go to land with them. But the classmates were watching her with strange, their sight were glancing question which the love was so sweet. She smiled and told them:” I have talked with Liu Tao about our ideal.” They broken the laughing and spoke with one voice:”we are all belive ,your ideal with Liu Tao that must be “mariage”! after it they laughed loudly.

The teacher listened the words ,he told them:”I have arrange Qing Zheng to talk with Liu Tao, don’t say any words again.”

But Liu Tao was so happy when he heard the teacher’s words. He told to Qing Zheng :”the teacher have agreed our love!”

Qing Zheng shied and did’t answered any words.


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  • our youth (serial 42) 2020-5-9 18:53

    I suggest that you read the New Yorker, the Paris Review, and Harper's if you strive to learn how to write like a literary type;  such A-list publications publish several gripping stories every week or month.  At the very least, you could learn how to flesh out this story with more detail. Good luck to you.

  • our youth (serial 35) 2020-5-3 19:31

    Sorry for being plain-spoken, and I don't mean to discourage you from writing creatively, just one suggestion: in addition to spending time developing the plot of your story, please also put in the hours to work on grammar and other basics of English.

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